My new 7s and TTG Rap

Ok, first to ttg
They are so S**T!
They never passed the pitt
They scammed all of us
Wasted our time..
But [D]ont[S]top[M]odding made it alright!
Second to se7ensins,
I never was scammed
They aint got no problem
But if you get rude
Want a 1 v 1?
I'll whoop your bum!

Lol post and reply on what you think, also if it should be made bigger or shorter, what should be added etc

nice raps but you need add more stuff

if you weren't part of dsm I would tell you to stop trying to be like me... but since you are you need to make it longer have more rhyme... dude I don't even see like a beat you caqn sing this to... but you will get better, hopefully.

Mine:
The Tech Game scams they aren't legit
And if you think I'm wrong then join their S**T
I wanna clan match we'll hurt their pride
They'll be screaming how they wish we die
All night they try
And still ev-er-y time
We whip their bum so bad they start to cry
Yeah tears in their eyes
TTG shaun your gay
Your uncle touches everyday
The Ghetto Man One
You might number one
But you still have one big cock in your bum
Man you love big cock
Too bad that's not what TTG has got
KING KONG AIN'T GOT S**T ON US
YO SHAUN YOU MIGHT HAVE A BIG HEAD
BUT YOU HAVE THE BRAIN THE SIZE OF A NATS COCK